“Leeland’s shitty day would quickly elevate to pure nightmare.” – Old Writing

This is a year-old excerpt, and it definitely shows in the prose (especially in that first sentence… what?!) Nonetheless, there’s some glimmers of good stuff in there!

(Background: Leeland and her girlfriend Clarke are competitors on a TV show. Leeland was just framed for sabotage, getting both of them banned.)

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